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Offline Karel

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« on: September 24, 2011, 09:55:29 am »
Blending and depth could be better,quick work in the morning.
Some flaws,render looks resized and therefore it's a bit plain,I'll update it soon. :)

Not to sound egoistic but I like the colors. :)

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Re: Vertical
« Reply #1 on: September 24, 2011, 11:18:19 am »
I really like it, but I have some points you could try to improve ::)

You could move the renders a little to the right, to fill the open spot at the right (just a little).
I don't know if this was what you wanted, but I can't really see where the light comes from,
there are much bright/white spots, which is a nice effect though.

Text is fine, blending could be a bit better like you said yourself, but overall:

Great work ;)

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Re: Vertical
« Reply #2 on: September 24, 2011, 04:03:59 pm »
I really like it, but I have some points you could try to improve ::)

You could move the renders a little to the right, to fill the open spot at the right (just a little).
I don't know if this was what you wanted, but I can't really see where the light comes from,
there are much bright/white spots, which is a nice effect though.

Text is fine, blending could be a bit better like you said yourself, but overall:

Great work ;)
Shame on me,I forgot to add lightning source.

Thanks for advice. :]