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My unifinished result from Power tutorial by vasco.
« on: September 26, 2011, 08:35:06 pm »
I've tried Vasco tutorial (POWER) And i got these following results :


My unifinished result from Power tutorial by vasco.

*Note 1: Its unfinished, Im gonna add more things.
*Note 2: CnC please, It mean much for me :)


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Re: My unifinished result from Power tutorial by vasco.
« Reply #1 on: September 26, 2011, 08:38:50 pm »
You followed my advice, better already ;)
Nice outcome so far.

Blending could be a little better by erasing the edges of the render with a small soft brush, low opacity.
I'd love to see more :)

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Re: My unifinished result from Power tutorial by vasco.
« Reply #2 on: September 26, 2011, 08:40:44 pm »
You followed my advice, better already ;)
Nice outcome so far.

Blending could be a little better by erasing the edges of the render with a small soft brush, low opacity.
I'd love to see more :)
Yea, i knew it would be better if i cut it from left side,
Thanks for this kind comment :)

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Re: My unifinished result from Power tutorial by vasco.
« Reply #3 on: September 27, 2011, 09:37:12 am »
I agree with Grily,but I have to point out that render resizing and placement is well done. :)

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Re: My unifinished result from Power tutorial by vasco.
« Reply #4 on: September 27, 2011, 08:23:39 pm »
After i added some glow it got like this :


My unifinished result from Power tutorial by vasco.

Is it better now?

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Re: My unifinished result from Power tutorial by vasco.
« Reply #5 on: September 28, 2011, 10:53:44 am »
The edges of render look a bit awkward,that's what caught my eye,try blurring the hair slightly.
Maybe a nice c4d on the background?

Can't wait to see the outcome. :)

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Re: My unifinished result from Power tutorial by vasco.
« Reply #6 on: September 28, 2011, 02:26:58 pm »
The edges of render look a bit awkward,that's what caught my eye,try blurring the hair slightly.
Maybe a nice c4d on the background?

Can't wait to see the outcome. :)
I've made the render edges better..
Also tyvm,

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Re: My result from Power tutorial by vasco.[Edited]
« Reply #7 on: September 28, 2011, 02:43:56 pm »
EDITED AGAIN :


My unifinished result from Power tutorial by vasco.

I liked this signature alot.
Shall i add another thing i haven't added ? Post here!
Rate/Hate again!

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Re: My unifinished result from Power tutorial by vasco.
« Reply #8 on: September 28, 2011, 02:59:53 pm »
Black left/right draw attention to the text,which draws attention to the face,good job! :)

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Re: My unifinished result from Power tutorial by vasco.
« Reply #9 on: September 28, 2011, 05:11:46 pm »
Very nice outcome.

I see you improve ;)

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Re: My unifinished result from Power tutorial by vasco.
« Reply #10 on: September 28, 2011, 06:27:25 pm »
Thanks, im really glad that you both like it <3

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